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B.A.D Test comic - Page 2

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Ok, not overly happy with this one too many call signs to quickly and the layout ain't that crash hot either. Sure, I reckon it looks pretty enough, but from the standpoint of easily working out what's going on... not so good.

Oh, and that must the the world's worst drawn C-17 ever.

Wraith 11

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:iconpostie-1944:
Nice job with the cockpit details....what sort of plane is it in the first frame?

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As I see in life, there are four types of people; *Optimists - 'The glass is half full...' *Pessimists - 'The glass is half empty...' *Opportunists - 'The glass will be empty when I'm finished with it...' *Realists - 'Either way, I'm stuck washing up...'
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Pilatus PC-9s... same one's the Roulettes use, but in it's FAC guise. There'll be some more detailed shots of the exteriors in the next page or so.

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"Designers think everything done by someone else is awful, and that they could do it better themselves, which explains why I designed my own living room carpet, I suppose." - Chris Bangle
:icondawley:
Hmm, nice layout and detail, as usual. The only thing wierd about the C-17 is that it's a little bell-nosed (kinda fat) but that's not actually a complaint.

As usual, very nice job. Can't wait to see what comes next! :)

And I almost forgot... :beer: for the effort!

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SHODAN: Lo-look at you, hacker. A pa-pathetic creature of meat and bone, panting and sweating as you ru-run through my corridors-s.
HACKER: You sure? I have mechanical lungs thanks to the cyber implants, so I don't need to rest. But thanks for noticing!
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Thanks mate. Yeah, the C-17 drove me up the wall... eventually gave up and took the least awful looking line I could find in the mess of sketching =P

woo! :beer:

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"Designers think everything done by someone else is awful, and that they could do it better themselves, which explains why I designed my own living room carpet, I suppose." - Chris Bangle
:iconbraxs69:
sweet :XD: I'm likin this comic already.
very awesome cant wait till the next, oh and there is nothing wrong with the C-17.
:iconwraith11:
Thanks mate.
Heh, I go back to uni tomorrow, so pages are gonna be awhile coming now...

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"Designers think everything done by someone else is awful, and that they could do it better themselves, which explains why I designed my own living room carpet, I suppose." - Chris Bangle
:iconzenhead:
yeah it needs to be longer.

like to see the final cut though, you have my support - you know if you evern need anything shot... give us a yell.

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Shoot film more often.
:iconwraith11:
Thanks mate.
Yeah, this loop should wind up in under 10 pages with any luck.... so far the response seems to have been positive, might look at setting up a stand-alone site for it through the year.

WES

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"Designers think everything done by someone else is awful, and that they could do it better themselves, which explains why I designed my own living room carpet, I suppose." - Chris Bangle
:iconpanzerfire:
Nice detail on the HIADSS (Is that how it's spelled?)
HUD.

This starts to look like a kickass manga! I'll be watching closely...

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Colonel Mertz von Quirnheim: Any problem on Earth can be solved with the careful application of high explosives.

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